Feedback on Film from teacher

My teachers said that there was an issue to my input into the project. They said to use no zooms and the 3rd person didn't really work.
Mise en scene- when there was a mirror in the bedroom/classroom.
Length of shots are too long so they need to be shorter to create tension.
They said to cut out the dialogue.

Feedback for film

Were given feedback on our film.

Successes:
Good camera shots and angles and good editing.
Good blur to create disorientation. and good effective lighting.

Improvements:
Consider effects more and music and titles.
Make it shorter.
Change the ringtone.

Overall People thought we should get a high level 2/ low level 3.

Feedback From Film Pitch

On friday, Mark and i presented our film pitch to the class, and everyone filled in a feedback sheet about what they thought of the idea, any potential problems they thought we might have, and suggestions they had to improve our idea.

Our class put down that our idea for the film fits the genre of supernatural, thriller and action. This is good because this is what we have been aiminng for.

Texts The Film Reminded People Of- This Is England, Grudge, Twilight,
Heroes, Spiderman, and Superman.

We were given positive feedback such as, 'Storyline is very structured", 'Good idea, can use really cool lighting and shots', ' Good enigma to make an audience intrigued. Good range of genre types', 'Well thought out plot'

We were also given some advice such as, 'Consider what camera and editing you will use and consider the costume and make up and effects for the supernatural guy', 'Use quick cuts', 'Use contact lenses to change the colour of the bad guys eyes'